No matter where you will go
You will be reminded of her
Her voice, her scent will follow you around
You will search for her in everyone you meet
And the moon, stars and the sun will watch you struggle through the pain.
She was the kind of girl that taught you how to breath right
The one that could make your house, a home.
The one that made the darkest times seem brighter,
That calmed your fears with just a simple smile
And sang lullabies to you while her fingers caressed your mind.
The world fell asleep that night with her voice echoing through it.
No matter where you will go
You will be reminded of her
You will search for her in everyone you meet
You chose some one else over her?
Bad choice mate,
Well the new girl left you, din’t she?
She left you
Just Like you left the one girl this universe made for you
Just you.
You left your girl when she needed you
When she was losing her light fighting for you
You taught her to never love like that ever again
You taught her to doubt every word someone says
But you already know that,
What you don’t know is that
No matter where you will go
You will be reminded of her
Her smile, Her eyes will follow you in your mind
And soon you will see her light up again
And she will find joy with someone new
You will search for her in everyone you meet
And the moon, stars and the sun will watch you struggle through the pain
But You will still keep searching for her in everyone you meet
Because she was the only one you were
supposed to keep.
This is the second post of The Topic Thingie! Thank You so much everyone for supporting me everyone! I really appreciate it. Let those posts rolling in people! I’ve decided I’ll have a post linking all those submissions. Just let me know what you all think of that!
TA TA!
I think good poetry evokes emotion…this one made me cry. Ah, love…damnit! It’s a good one. Sigh.
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So so beautiful, I pray God protects us from making such regretful mistakes, Ameen.
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I hope so too but we all might make them anyways xD Thank you! If you don’t mind me asking Muslims do say ameen instead of amen right?
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Yes, exactly, we do say ameen. God, I hope I don’t make such mistakes! I pray like insanity when faced with such struggles. We have this guidance prayer that we pray it’s called the “Istikhara Prayer”, it goes like this:
“O Allaah, I seek Your guidance [in making a choice] by virtue of Your knowledge, and I seek ability by virtue of Your power, and I ask You of Your great bounty. You have power, I have none. And You know, I know not. You are the Knower of hidden things. O Allaah, if in Your knowledge, this matter is good for me both in this world and in the Hereafter, then ordain it for me, make it easy for me, and bless it for me. And if in Your knowledge it is bad for me and for my religion, my livelihood and my affairs, then turn me away from it, and ordain for me the good wherever it may be and make me pleased, and content with it.”
Alas, sometimes mistakes are necessary for growth.
Btw, love your blog!
God Bless,
MM
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HI,
I know Patty. Intense poems. You have an engaged community here. Congratulations. I met you on Danny Ray’s Meet and Greet.
Nice to meet you.
Janice
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That’s really powerful
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Glad you think that! x)
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It should be there but just in case the drop down doesn’t show
http://funfamliving.com
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My daughter was extremely hurt by a young man she new since middle school and thought she was in love with. She’s 19 now. this poem explains what this guy is going through, since she found someone else who will love her and pay attention to her. She is very kind, a hard worker, and beautiful (and I’m not just saying that cause I’m her Mom), but he made a big mistake treating her wrong and this poem describes it perfectly.
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Hey! I bet she is everything you say. Heartbreaks either affect us well or well ruins us. I am so glad she is happy now. And no body, I mean nobody deserves to be treated wrong. I am so glad she got out of it. I bet she’s a strong ass xD Also I am glad she could relate to it! Thank you!!
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Thank You and I think you are very talented also. Keep it comming!
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Thank you! I really wanted to check your blog but my WP is messed up. Could you please give me the link? Thanks again! 😉
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Hi!
I found you through Mental Break – in Progress’s reblog.
Great poem!
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Hey!
Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Mental Break – In Progress and commented:
So impressed with this girl and I just met her like 2 minutes ago! lol I ❤ Blogging. This poem could not ring more true for so many people!
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OMG! Thank you so very much!! Haha
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You are most welcome! 🙂
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LOVE ❤ So glad we have crossed paths Jade 🙂 This poem rang so true for me! I didn't know how to put that kind of pain into words until just now and I sincerely thank you for that! xo
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome! 🙂
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Oh my god my WP is messing with me! It just showed LOVE as the comment! GRRR. Oh well Let’s start again xD
Thank you so much! Words have always been my mascot so guess its just it Or i just imagine things xD I am so glad I met you! And you’re welcome 😉 Thanks again! Cheers!
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Lol it’s all good we got there! 😀
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Oh yes! I really like your blog been stalking you xD
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I thought it was beautiful! It painted a very clear picture in my mind. I’ve always wondered if that person ever thought of me. I guess maybe he did 🙂
“And sang lullabies to you while her fingers caress your mind” ~ is my favorite line!
Brie (Visiting from the Community Pool)
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So glad you liked it! And yes I try to keep it simple xP so glad that’s point!
I don’t know ve always thought its a beautiful gesture and it can be taken in two different ways. Thank you so much for stopping by!
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I really wanted to check your blog out but my wp is acting dumb could u please give me the link to it?
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Of course! It’s: PureLifeology.wordpress.com I hope you enjoy 🙂
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Great 🙂 I like it !
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Thank you !!
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Reblogged this on My not so everyday thoughts and commented:
Well..this one hit me in my weak spot
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Thank you !!
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Thank you so much!
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Love
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Yes ?
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I love it that you repeated:
No matter where you will go
You will be reminded of her
You go girl!
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Hahaha I like that part too xD thank you so much! So glad you liked it 🙂
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😀 Welcome
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this is amazing. keep up. the poem was very strong in the middle
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Thank you. Maybe yes it did get a lil strong. Hope you liked it tho! x)
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I loved it 🙂 it was awesome jade
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Thank you maestro! 🙂
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Welcome madame
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This was powerful Jadey. “The moon, stars and sun will watch you struggle through your pain” . I love that repetition of line after every punch. They are always there watching you fall in love, breaking up, tearing down.
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They are, aren’t they! Maybe the sun is for when we are single, the stars when in love and the moon when we are left alone. Thanks Aliyah Wahliya!
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Wow that is powerful. Maybe that’s why the sun is shining so bright on single me 😛
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Hahahaha its literally giving me tans out here!
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LOL saame.
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sad truth is people realize it when it is too late! great pieces of thoughts beautiful put together!
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Yes very late, the grass is always greener on the other side right? Thank you sana!
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right! 🙂 U r welcome.
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This is absolutely beautiful.
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So glad you liked it! 🙂
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