She asks what I love about her,
And I think of her wild brown hair that dances with her in her pokemon Pjs .
I think of her blush that starts from her neck and stains her whole face in a matter of seconds. I think of her wild smile that heightens my heart rate all the time. I think of the times she holds her head high. I think of the times she annoys me out of my mind when I wonder if she is crazy but gosh I fall harder those times.
I think of the beautiful frown she sports when she is annoyed at me. I think of the times she know which buttons to push. I think of her intelligence and of how I would give in for her. I think of the self satisfied smirk that adorns her face when she burns someone down with her words.
I think of her long toes that play with her slippers as we sit on the couch drinking coffee. I think of her hair between my fingers and her sarcasm. I think of her shine that gets me through dark nights.
I think of her smile when we are sit in the garden watching children play because that was her escape from life. I think to the time when she was hugging my favorite jacket close to keep herself warm from the chilly winds outside. I think of how sometimes I think of her as my invisible jacket. I think of her tears and how I would willingly take all blows I can, just for her.
So I wrap an arm around her waist and pull her close only to whisper “I love everything. Just Everything you are.” And I know she deserves to know more. But the damn blush starts again and I think she knows exactly what I mean.
Cheers,
Jade 😉
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Leave me completely shattered,
You will search for her in everyone you meet
And the moon , stars and the sun will watch you struggle through the pain
They ask why you both broke up.
They talk About how perfect you both were.
You close your eyes and a million memories flash through them .
Nice work! loved it.
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Thank you! 😀
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I have a confession to make… I clicked “I don’t like reading” on your banner. That was obviously a lie… =\
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*gasps* How could you lie to the website? :O
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I am not sure if I like the conversation in the comments better or the post itself.
Charlie does have that effect :3
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Hahaha he does. Its always fun with him. Thank you for taking time and reading both of them xD
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Jade and charliepriest… i enjoyed reading your conversation… why dont you guys collaborate on a poem or something … two great minds in one..
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Hahaha I am sure your talking about me in the great mind part xD Just kidding. I think it’s a great idea!! It should be fun but we might just end up annoying each other instead haha I’ll ask him about it. Thanks for all the likes and stopping by michnavs! I appreciate it alot!
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Thanks for stopping by, Jade.
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Right back ya! 😉
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loved it!
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Glad you did! Thank you so much!
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Lovely piece. Happy New Year to you and yours. 🙂 — Suzanne Joshi
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Thank you so much! So glad you liked it! Happy new year to you too! – Jade 🙂
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This is very pretty. Telling our loved ones specific things we love about them is always more satisfying and special for them than generalities.
Thanks for visiting my site. Much appreciated!
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I agree it is. I guess it’s even good for a lasting love. Takes a lot of effort though, even for the loved ones. You’re welcome. Thank you for checking my work out ! Appreciated!
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The narrative personalizes individual eccentricities with magical wonder. Reading is very therapeutic. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Aww thank you so much! It means a lot to me!
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Loved your narrative synthesis of the Erotic and the Platonic. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Thank you! Calling it erotic and platonic is kinda contary
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Thank you! Calling it erotic and platonic is kinda contrary though. So glad you liked it!
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What a beautiful post! I am a romantic and posts like these leave me speechless. I lost my wife a few years ago and miss such times as you describe.
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Reblogged this on Risque Bizness: Enter at Your Own Risque.
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Lovely written
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Thank you!
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Well the one person suggested you are a guy instead of asking if you are into women. That would have been a better question. I personally have gay and lesbian friends and I understand non gay women complimenting other women for anything at all but straight men do not normally unless it is something regarding their fashion or something they are jealous of.
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Hahaha he is a friend who was just joking around pal dw. And nope I am not into women, it was just the character I was into. Well I do know a lot of men who do think like that…but can never man up and say it. It’s more like he s content with her? And it doesn’t always have to be jealousy or something for a guy to think like that dude. And come on i know guys who literally laugh on anything their crush says xD Its CUTEEEEEE!
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I stay in character in a lot of writings and switch so much I can make ppl dizzy or I stick with it for several posts in different categories. Though I do not look at guys, LOL.
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Hahaha I ve noticed. But I ve never seen a writing where you wrote from a girls point of view
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I did it is in erotica from both sides of control. I can write from a woman’s POV. I would wonder what would be thought as some of my adult stuff did really well but I offended like 20 close friends even though they were clearly titled. I could talk from a woman’s POV as I also plan to add a couple of different poetry styles. I have some with no style as they are pictures or waves and that has no real title and I have 400 plus poems and I 4 times added categories but not to a roll that big it would take a day. LOL
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Alright I am going to try one now from a scared girl’s POV
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Go go do it!
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How was this?
https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/12/27/i-wanted-him-to-ask-me-for-a-long-time-for-my-friend/
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Go go do it!
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Jade, you are a great writer so I hope the charachter in this little piece of art wasn´t you since that would mean you´re, a guy!!
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Hahaha thank you! And nope I checked not a guy for sure xD
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o.k…..my heart is starting to beat now
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Hahaha ya know ? that great writer comment made my day ! Thanks xD
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Hold on now, so you said you where with another guy,hum hum hum…. I got to meet him and then, dispose of that man.
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Is that a way to know whether I am with someone or not? xD Smoottth!
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It´s a way to getting rid off him, if you know what I mean…..Mafia style, then chop here a bit there and no body is found, hummmm
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Hahaha mafia does it with guns now! So much more mess free! Guess you confused them to be a ninja there for a bit xD hummmmmm
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Talk about ninjas, yesterday I saw a documentary about ninjas, you know that they cut off the heads of the opponents in battle and take them with them back. And the ninja with most heads is considered the best. Hell, I´m wanna be a ninja, walking around town with heads in my hands, nobody would mess with a person like that so forget about Mafia
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I did not know that! Wow you can store those heads on a wall and then have them state at you like dude you killed me. Shit! What if one of the head starts talking one day! Hahaha yeah you can even dodge the mafia bullets with the ninja sword! But they have a funny traditional costume tho xD you won’t look badass in it!
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That´s true, the freaking customs looked like they where going more to a festival than to battle.
Aboout the heads, ofcourse you can hang them on the walls. Here in Spain people that are really into Bulls, I like running with them but the bullfights bore me, anyways they do have a bunch of heads of Bulls on the walls you even find them in certain very typical Spanish bars which as you would guess I love to go, I even start talking to the Bulls head after a couple of beers, they´re quite nice by the way a bit silent sometimes though but good listeners.
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Hey! Maybe their battles are celebrations for them! Yeah I knew it was a tradition somewhere. Bull fights scare me srsly. Even the bull riding thing. I d prob die if I try that haha. Anyways after a few beers everything become good listeners haha. Did those bulls bitch to you about their owners? And tell you dirty secrets of the bar? xD
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I already knew the dirty secrets, one of them was me 😉
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Hahaha careful! those bulls don’t keep their mouths shut themselves 😉
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Depends on what you give them
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Nah they’ll just see me and spill everything 😉
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I was going to say a very colourful comment but I´ll restrain myself
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Remind me I am dumb and gotta delete that haha
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love is in the air…… (you can´t delete that)
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Uh huh I can!
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no, i just put a new widget that unables yo to do it
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U can’t put a widget on my blog hahaha you do know I can xD
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look———-another widget in your blog, but it went so fast you didn´t even see it
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Cause of your ninja skills? xD
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You go it, I´m ninja Charly which by the way i just got an ide for a poem which I´ll even write while commenting with you
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Sorry to mess with the plan xD Had to go meet some friends. Yup ninja Charly in weird costume! Got it!
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So you went out living me here talking to myself whie you where having fun with your Friends and you think is right and you think is good and you think….no! You go out when I say you go out, now go get me a cup of tea.
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*sigh* Your having another break down. You are not god charly…its a dellusion. We need to see the psychologist again. You better pay the bills this time around okay!
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All the psychologist in the world don´t want to see me, probably they think I´m a lost cause, so what do we do know?
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Hahaha don’t worry we ll find a psychologist willing to treat you then!
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Thank you
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Anytime.!
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look, just wrote this piece of art and you where the inspiration
https://charlypriest.wordpress.com/2015/12/28/ninja-boy/
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Hey Jade, forgot, what did you do with the story I sent you?
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I am gonna post all the posts in bit with the new months topic. What do you suggest I do with it ? xD
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Put it as the best story ever written in history, so the category should be “Incredible writing! I´m fainting after Reading this”, maybe a bit too long though
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Hahaha guess the crowd will know its fake if I faint after every writing. Damn wouldn’t wanna be caught now right!
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Just expose every part of you….meaning your feelings, just be an open book so I can read it.
Damn, that line just came out, not bad I think, may even try it with a flesh and blood person
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Probably will even work of you say it well. But what’s the fun in being an open book anyways? Books that open slowly are much more fun anyways
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I know Jade, or maybe is Jaime…..
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You d never know!
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Or Juan?… and how come I´ll never know, never say never, you never know what life is going to throw at you
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What is I am a guy after all huh. How d u ever know.
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Maybe we meet some day, who knows, maybe in Paradise…..but not there since I´ll probably going to hell so during my lifetime in this earth, I´ll part the seas like Moses to see you. From India you are if I remember correctly? Well if you´re from there I´ll be the white guy on top of an elephant, one of those you guys have roaming through the streets. Not hard to spot me
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Don’t worry I am going to hell too so prob will meet ya there 😉 Hahaha and if u bring elephants in my city ull prob get arrested xD But yup white guy on elephant will keep it in mine !
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Aren´t there elephants already roaming around inside your city?….
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It’s a city not a forest do do
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I thought in India you worshiped elephants, and that they walked around the city
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Yeah we worship the elephant headed god – ganesha but no dude its not a forest where elephants jju roam around…I personally have only seen them in zoo tbh
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😉 I was just messing with you
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Oh. But srsly once a guy was so confused that I have white skin being an Indian…he went like dont all Indians haveblack skin? Srsly that was one of the weirdest things I was ever answered to.
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I´m so white that a person told me if I came from Pluto, since the sun doesn´t reach there, I´m hey dudess are you nuts or what? Then she kissed me thinking she was kissing someone from another planet an E.T of sorts so it kind of went well being confused that way
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Shit I just saw this hahahahahaha this person commented on my post saying we should do a collab cause he enjoyed reading our chat so I was like what did this dude read and I m laughing!
But srsly Pluto? It’s not even a planet geez. Wasn’t Ur face enough for her to run away tho? xD
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Don´t curse, is not ladylike.
We could write a post with only the comments on this post of yours.
Call it…. “Comedic outcome i.n.c”
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Ayy don’t tell me what to do! *Growls*
Yeah your comments are pretty normal huh we really should have a post with us debating or even just a normal convo of us haha Its entertaining now that I read them !!
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I do have that effect on others….
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Uh huhhh
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😉 You know you want this ❤
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You are delusional
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