Hey! Here is my First post for “The first sighting of love” In the Topic Thingy! Enjoy 😉
There were hundreds of times
She fell from her bike before she actually learnt how to ride it
The scars on her little knees were the proof
Of her pain
but whenever she fell,
She cried a bit,
But got right up and tried again
She did give her scars time to heal
But made sure she rode again
but Falling never scared her from riding the bike again
Cause the air in the hair ,
The thrill in her pit
the freedom of her heart
the happiness, was all too addicting
Then what went wrong when she fell in love
Why was she so afraid to get up and ride on it again even though it was her first fall?
She should know Injuries is what will make her stronger.
After all she was learning to ride love this time.
It takes a few mistakes,
For us all.
You’re basically describing everything I feel at the moment! Haha, thank you. nicely done! Love the poem.
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I am so glad I could do that! That itself is my aim. Thank you!
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Why aren’t you on my following list yet?! Hehe, I look forward to read more from your work 🙂
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I really enjoyed this piece, Great job!
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Oh thank you so much!!
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Yes, she shouldn’t give up. There are bound to be a few falls when it comes to romance. 🙂
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Totally. Don’t worry she s a strong girl she ll make it 😉 Thanks btw!
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That’s good to hear. Perhaps she could buy some knee pads. 🙂
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Hahaha maybe that could work. Good idea xD
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I really love your approach to the topic here! You can’t learn without falling on your face some. I tried to take a different approach too and posted my first topic thingy! I linked you in my post 🙂
https://septembersrose.wordpress.com/2015/12/12/that-thursday/
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So glad you liked it! Ill check it out immediately! I bet it’s good! Thank you so much for participating!
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I’m excited to be a part of this!
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Oh, I agree. For us all!
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Glad you do! Thank you for reading!
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Nice
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