Source: If There is a God
There is God with kindness in his every inch,
That is why those grusome nights turn into mornings,
There is god with mercy in his every act
Because it is him who teaches the loveless cold hearts to love again
There is God with grace and beauty in his every move
Who makes the seeds grow strong and dig roots,
So you can rest, grow and learn under the tree
There is God because we need the little goodness left in this world.
I don’t mean to offend the real poet of the poem, I just have a strong minded belief and felt like I could write an opposite version of the poem. Thank you! 🙂
Beautiful poem.
Thank you for writing it.
Such uplifting words are what this world needs more of.
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Reblogged this on kaisernicholas and commented:
I really like this. It speaks to me a little since I am a Christian.
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Beautiful poem, I really love how your values shine through in everything you write. It makes your stuff stand out 🙂
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Wow. Thank you soo much!! You just made my day…or well night xD
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Aw I’m glad!
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You can call it god ,I call it nature ,as its confusing as if god is there then why sufferings ,then comes karma and all births so keep faith as faith is important
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I believe we need sufferings to grow and to learn. And God is the one controlling nature , he is the one who made it. So if we don’t suffer how will we appreciate the amazing things in life?
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Lovely piece, you are very much right
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Nice. It seems that your hands are practiced.
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Thank you! I guess they are at this point they can just write pretty easily!
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🙂
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As the admin of this website is working, no hesitation very
soon it will be well-known, due to its feature contents. Great work 🙂
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Beautiful 👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you!! How’s it going for you! Still craving chocolate? xZ
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Hahaha yeah.It never stops 😛
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I know where your coming from xP
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This a very sweet poem! 🙂
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Just like you? xD Thank you!
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness and commented:
A good new blogger, welcome her with open arms..
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Omg! Thank you so much!!
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You are welcome.
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Omg pal! This is the first comment and reblog of yours on my site xD
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Really, are you sure? I had to have reblogged you before. I do so many followers I may not have commented, except to nominate you for an award or challenge, but I am trying to add that but I go through my followers pretty much daily;)
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This is probably the first post you saw of mine xD its realllyyy old! Of course you have re blogged me before haha check which post I am talking about!
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I looked and the latest I saw was in December, nominated for a couple of awards, the post you wanted me to write from a woman’s POV was Dec 27th and I got to 2/3rds of your material. I may have missed if I reblogged in January…
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I think I started blogging in Nov. What happened to the Wwe idea? Did you do it with the other writer?
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No I did not.
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the first post I saw of yours was the distance killed us. if I remember right…
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Yeah that was the first post that got attention xD
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I remembered it and know you reposted it.
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